Rewrite review for "Mr Bean"

In a morning, a man, he is Mr bean, has broken his favorite mug. He was disappointed, so he went to a shop for buying a new same one. But, the shop assistant took a rude attitude to him. She said that the mug is not here.
When Mr Bean left the shop with sadness, he found a lorry was drawn of the mug. He chased it by his car.
On the other place, the Queen lost her favorite dog. When She and her butler were looking for the dog, the queen found her dog is front of a car. Mr Bean's car.
Mr Bean entered into the shop of a building. the building is Buckingham palace! We can buy the mug printed the queen.
Suddenly, the dog bit Mr Bean's teddy, and run away while holding it. Mr Bean chased it in a hurry. After a while chasing the dog, he could get it back. But they(Mr Bean and the dog) wandered a hidden room in the dark.
When they were looking for the exit, a hidden door opens suddenly,they were able to go outside.
And the queen could find her dog because she stayed near the door which they came out. After the accident,  Mr Bean was commended by the queen.

Those are the story's outline.
First, I enjoyed the funny expressions of Mr Bean.
We can feel his emotion from not only the context but also his expression.
Second, deployment was quickly to read.
I think that a slowly deployment makes us bore. So a quickly deployment is bettering than slowly one.
Third, the story's end is happy ending. As everyone say "All's Well That Ends Well.", we can be interesting after reading a happy ending story.